ADULT COLLECTION

Khandelwal's Poetic Process

An intimate journey into the art of poetry, tracing every stage from inspiration to publication. Fifty-two thoughtful poems reveal the triumphs, struggles, and quiet mysteries behind the creative process.

About the Book

Khandelwal’s Poetic Process marks a deliberate turn in the seven collections. Where the earlier books range across family, love, social comment and the news of the day, this one narrows its lens to a single subject, the writing of poetry itself. Fifty-two poems trace the life of a poem from the first stirring of an idea through composition, revision, rejection and, sometimes, publication.

The book draws together poems first published across three earlier collections with twenty-one new compositions, so a reader already familiar with Khandelwal’s work will recognise some lines while meeting others for the first time. The tone moves between the grave and the wry. ‘The Poem Unborn’ looks at a world too saturated with bad news to leave room for a finished poem, while ‘A Bad Poem’ compares a failed poem to an old landline nobody expects to work. Dr Neelanjana Pathak, who contributes the foreword, describes the collection as a treasure trove for all poetry lovers and notes that its fifty-two poems are distinct yet overlapping, each one approaching the same subject from a different angle.

PRAISE AND CRITICAL ACCLAIM

“Poetic Culinary: Words on the Menu is Rajiv Khandelwal’s undoubtedly a master-piece poetic composition in which he has used his pen skillfully to explain the poetic process with the help of culinary metaphors. With its logical flow and vivid presentation of highly evocative images, his poem has become delightful reading.”

Dr Kailash Nath Khandelwal | Retired Professor of English and ex-Principal, National Postgraduate College, Bhongaon

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Poetic Culinary: Words on the Menu

A review of the poem "Poetic Culinary: Words on the Menu" from Khandelwal's Poetic Process.

Dr. Kailash Nath Khandelwal

Retired Professor of English • Former Principal, National Postgraduate College, Bhongaon (Mainpuri), Uttar Pradesh

Review of "Poetic Culinary: Words on the Menu" From Khandelwal's Poetic Process • Rajiv Khandelwal • Ukiyoto Publishing • 2024
Step into your memory store Where shelves of ideas softly sigh Gather them like ripe fruits Pick up as many as you dare But make sure of a good selection Of those open to exploration
Now to the section of spices Nouns, verbs, adjectives Oh! so flavourful Stock well on the sturdy nouns Add specific, accurate verbs in abundance But use adjectives sparingly Like a sprinkle of saffron Then go to the floor of poetic elements Where they store rhymes, rhythm, prosody Choose with care They’re the symphony of sensation To enhance the flavours of your creation Carefully blend the chosen ideas Like a master chef Marinate them in emotions and thoughts Debone each word with skilled finesse So every morsel is tender and succulent Let the composition simmer and sizzle Then garnish it with vivid imagery With the perfect balance of senses Until the aroma of poetry, fills the page Creating a visual feast for seeking eyes Inviting readers to savour The delectable treat for soul and mind Like a gourmet meal, leaving an everlasting taste

The poet Rajiv Khandelwal is widely known for his innovative and experimental approach to writing poetry among the fraternity of English poets in India and abroad. The present poem, ‘Poetic Culinary: Words on the Menu’, is an enchanting and delightful exploration of the art of poetry writing. Rajiv Khandelwal has a dexterous knack for using peculiar, uncommon, yet apt images, metaphors, and similes in his poems, with the result that his poems are received with a positive sense of awe and admiration by his avid readers.

‘Poetic Culinary’ is an impressive and beautiful poem in which Khandelwal uses culinary imagery for the purpose of his poetic artistry. Like a master artist, the poet portrays the poetic process with the help of his ‘memory store’, where shelves of ideas softly sigh and the imagination is invited to gather ripe fruits. He makes a selection from the menu of the master chef’s kitchen to suit the figurative components of his poem. The congruity between the chef’s menu and the poet’s poem is a remarkable poetic feat. As culinary art satisfies the carnal senses of human beings, the poetic art nourishes the soul and leaves an everlasting indelible impression in the mental domain of the poetry lover.

At the very outset, the poem attracts the reader and invites them to “Step into your memory store” where “shelves of ideas softly sigh.” With the help of the metaphor of shelves and fruits, the poet evokes the further possibilities of fertile imagination.

The poet then comes to the process of crafting poetry. He compares words to ‘spices’. As spices are carefully used for cooking, so words — nouns, verbs, adjectives — need as much care. The poet suggests:

Stock well on the sturdy nouns Add specific, accurate verbs in abundance But use adjectives sparingly Like a sprinkle of saffron.

The poet lays emphasis on the use of precise language in poetry. ‘Sturdy nouns’ and ‘accurate verbs’ make the poem artistically strong and more appealing. The imagery of saffron adds to the poetic flavour of the composition. Judicious use of descriptive words enhances the poem’s inherent meaning and value.

With ‘the floor of poetic elements’ now prepared, the poet directs his discerning attention to ‘rhymes, rhythm, prosody’ to create:

the symphony of sensation To enhance the flavours of your creation.

These elements are indispensable as they enhance musicality in the lines and depth in the whole poem. The vivid imagery of ‘symphony and sensation’ adds melodious music that evokes relevant emotions in the reader.

The poetic process moves on further: Carefully blend the chosen ideas Like a master chef Marinate them in emotions and thoughts Debone each word with skilled finesse So every morsel is tender and succulent.

Khandelwal’s masterly stroke is evidently laudable when he, like a skilled chef, suggests blending ‘the chosen ideas’ and marinating ‘them in emotions and thoughts’ to make the poetic dish palatable and the reader imaginatively excited. The expression ‘every morsel is tender and succulent’ shows the poet’s deep understanding of the sensory appeal of poetry, further evident in the following stanza:

Let the composition simmer and sizzle Then garnish it with vivid imagery With the perfect balance of senses Until the aroma of poetry, fills the page

The variegated visual feast is rich with memorable sensuous words and expressions: ‘symphony of sensation’, ‘enhance the flavours’, ‘marinate’, ‘debone each word’, ‘morsel is tender and succulent’, ‘aroma of poetry’, ‘simmer and sizzle’, ‘garnish’, ‘balance of senses’, ‘visual feast’, ‘delectable treat’, and ‘a gourmet meal’, leaving ‘an everlasting taste’. In the Keatsian vein, Khandelwal is a sensuous poet through and through.

To conclude, ‘Poetic Culinary: Words on the Menu’ is undoubtedly a masterpiece poetic composition in which Rajiv Khandelwal has used his pen skilfully to explain the poetic process with the help of culinary metaphors. With its logical flow and vivid presentation of highly evocative images, the poem has become delightful reading. The poet has succeeded in establishing the veracity of his deep-felt notion that poetry has the power to nourish the soul and is capable of leaving an ever-lasting imprint in the minds of readers. Khandelwal has proved that a balanced combination of thought and emotion certainly goes to make a memorable piece of poetry.